Poem:Meant to be
I was alright
I was alright
I was doing just fine
And then…
You said you fell
You fell in love
With whom or with what?
Is this the start to the new year that you had wished for and got?
As much of a surprise to you as it is to me?
Some say these things, although rare,
They’re here to stay and are meant to be
Review: Meant to be
Meant to be?
Meant to be!
Alowing ‘destiny’ to decide and to take over?
Suerly not, right?
The poet was okay, weren’t they?
Until they learnt of someone whom they know of having fallen. Whoops,
oh dear and oh no right? I automatically think the worst. Could they be hurt?
My mind is about to spiral into ‘worry mode’ then it’s immediately revealed
that this other person has fallen… in love. Pow! What a mighty force that is.
What a clout! It could have been an instant, thing or is that more of the ‘phwoar factor’ of lust? Love develops over time doesn’t it. It’s all about connecting. I’m no expert but it’s all about feeling good in the company of that other person and that they feel the same about you too. That is love and respect in a nutshell, right? Love is vast and so is the arena that it takes place within.
Physically falling can be embarrassing, can hurt and can leave bruises. Is that the same with falling in love? What is ‘love’ in the poem and where is it going?
Mysterious as it’s not revealed what exactly it is that the person has fallen in love with. A thing? An activity? A person? (I’m scanning the words for clues)
It looks as though this was potentially a new year’s wish. We all make those don’t we. The good intentions. Out with the old, blah blah blah…I yawn. For me, it’s all too clichéd to follow a herd and do everything in the traditional way and on the same day – January 1st (oh how I laugh, shrug my shoulders and roll my eyes at that!) Other stories for future times!
The poet plunges straight in with questioning. They obviously feel comfortable enough to do just that. I‘ve read and re-read the poem and I’m no closer to discovering what the ‘love’ is!
A surprise. Unexpected or have there always been signs that it was heading in this direction?
Perhaps that is the point of the poem for the reader to look at themselves and where they are within the broad spectrum of love? What are the things that they are curious about? What ignites? What are the things they do or want to be doing that offers that spark? The people in their lives? Who and what offers that connection, the warm feeling and that glow of love?
An intriguing little poem with effective rhyming.
I can only conclude on reading this; it was meant to be.