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Well wishing guest

Poem: Well wishing guest

 

Start as you mean to go on

It will end up like that anyway wont it?

Modesty is underrated.

Don’t I look happy to you??

Congratulations

 

Review: Well wishing guest

 

Instantly, I’m detecting judgement and some sort of ‘advice’ offered from the guest in the first line of the poem.’

According to the Poem’s title, the guest is ‘well-wishing’ right?

Hmm. Okay, I’ll go with that. I’ll bear that in mind. The sentiment is very succinct with few words. I can sense however they may be holding back with a lot more to say.

The guest might as well be saying,

“Today is a one off and an expensive one at that.”

“Everyday won’t be like this.” “You’ve been duped by a fantasy”

“Ask yourself, Why, have you chosen to do it like this?”

“What’s in it for you?”

People, might say all sorts,

“The groom is older than her own dad”

“Who will be the first to pop their clogs?”

“Do you like the taste of wedding cake?”

“Fruit cake yuck!”

“A bouquet of plastic flowers? yes, I do understand that, given the circumstances”.

Oh my!

So many views and opinions. So much is being thought of!

BUT these comments are indeed a few of the things that I have heard when attending weddings over the years. There’s a lot of pressure and opinions floating around.

It looks like ‘the guest’ is attempting to promote modesty and is a million miles away from the flashy and flamboyance.

‘The guest’ is saying that they are happy. Just look at them for goodness’s sake!..Hmm As the reader of this poem I am imagining all sorts. Has the guest always lived modestly. Did they live a more exuberant life, lost everything and are now speaking with ‘wise words’ of humility. What do they look like?

Will the couple be inspired by these well-meaning words?

Deeds and actions and the passing of time speaks louder doesn’t it?

 

Time will tell because time does tell. The guest has done well to hold back with more and offers congratulations to the couple. They’ve made it this far.

A thought provoking read.

The Reply

Poem:The Reply

 

You’re very welcome

And thanks too

I think you’re cute

Here’s the ring

And I will love you

As requested

 

Review: The Reply

 

How well mannered. They’ve been brought up ‘proper’ haven’t they?

‘The reply’ poem starts with politeness, gratitude, and the sweet comment of ‘cute’. Always a good sign to an ‘official’ beginning of a long-term commitment of a relationship even if the couple have been together for a million years or so. (which is what it could be, I suspect)

The proposal is reciprocated in the same nonchalant fashion, clearly without the need to get down on any knee or to compromise any other body part in the process! Being comfy and staying put is what I’m seeing here. Very wise and cool, no?

Should they even be getting married if they are that comfortable with each other?

BUT ‘she’ (I’m guesing it’s a she) wants that ring! From what I know, ladies of all generations do like a bit of jewellery for various aesthetic, emotional, and well-being reasons. It must be important for to her to have ’that’ ring though. What does she want to say to the world or to a few close loved ones with that symbol of devotion?

Her request has been acknowledged and granted.

Was she expecting any other romantic gestures?

No, I don’t think so! The ring is all she’s demanding.

They seem like the sort of couple that would indeed get married, yes, to each other, sure, within the same year, of course!

BUT potentially on different dates as it would suit them more to do so as I detect they are living ‘busy with work’ and other life commitments. Signing the marital paperwork on days that are convenient, even if it means on separate dates, is a very practical step to make.

They’ll get there in the end won’t they?

Oh, how I laugh and almost cry with with sadness (but not much) as I’m willing for there to be a bit of romance here and there, along with some passion when the lights go off… or at least dimmed a bit to create a ‘mood’ that’s not down to a dodgy flickering lightbulb.

That’s no mood enhancer, unless that of a haunted house is your thing?! (I won’t go there, horses for courses and all that!)

It doesn’t take me long to get to the punch line. in this short poem

The ring is here! hurrah!

‘I will love you!’ Phew, he’s said it

She’s got what she wanted for whatever the reason is.

As a reader, I can only guess. For the sake of… The parents? The children? The gossiping folk or even the goldfish? Bonkers, I know but anything can happen with lot’s of digital distractions of the now-a-days. I do hope the couple go on to cement a loving and solid union and I wish them well.

I think they’re both cute in their own ways.

I’m curious to know what’s going to happen next. I hope it lasts.

Perhaps it’s a sign and a woeful sigh of the times of how fast paced and ‘bullet pointed’  digital life that most lead. An adorable little read where ‘love’ is the answer.

The frank fairy speaks a fast track fairytale

 

Poem: The frank fairy speaks a fast track fairytale

Once upon a time

Stuff happened

Good and bad

Beauties

Beasties

Wolves

Witches

Ogres

Poverty and royalty

Then there’s the forest

There’s always a forest

Magic happened

And then?

They all lived in denial

They all lived ‘happily’ ever dafter

Good night sweet dreams

 

Review: The frank fairy speaks a fast track fairytale

My mistake was to skip straight to the word ‘fairytale’ in the title of the poem. In the middle of checking emails, I was in the mode for a nostalgic quick fix when I saw the poem pop up (poems have a tendency to do that sort of thing at times) Even though it said ‘fast track’ it didn’t put me off, au contraire. Excellent, I thought. We’re all pushed for time aren’t we and everything needs to be quick and instant, doesn’t it? I’d be sure to get a good dose of innocence and nostalgia, right?

…Wrong!

To hear those words ‘once upon a time’ How soothing an introduction I thought to myself.

Oh, how it takes me be back to those magical moments of childhood. Storytelling at primary school and at home in the evening, the bedtime stories. This quickie of a poem however reads differently to that of the cosy intro. It is indeed more than a just a ‘fast’ quick read. It’s broad, blunt, succinct, to the point and revelatory. Not at all fluffy. No. Fear and fantasy has to feature. It prompts the reader to think of the fairy-tales that they know of from childhood. Royalty with the delusion of being saved by a prince. Oh, how I laugh at this sort of thing as well as the other well known implausible tales I’ve remembered involving bears with their furniture and porridge. A pumpkin features too. Also breadcrumbs, glass slippers, a cat in boots and even a gingerbread house. These far-fetched stories were and still are told to little boys and girls. Really and why? What ‘bright spark’ thought this was a good idea? I’m not saying it isn’t. It’s all about who is saying it to a child and if they can cope with the comeback that could arise from having said it? Nightmares occurring and not the sweet dreams? Potential traumas, eh?  I’ll stop there.

Mind you, one could argue fairy tales are a good talking point and is preparing the much younger generation for the shocks, injustices and general upset from the real-life stories that have occurred throughout history and do indeed happen in everyday life?

Who’d be a journalist reporting on the constant upheavals, evils, and general misery in the world?

Limit the watching of these flat screen intruders I’d suggest. It’s not their fault. The news is not of their doing. It’s never good to shoot a messenger. We need communicators, yes, the good ones. With the rest, push that ‘off’ button I’d suggest.

Talking of which, all the characters within the poem could be applied to real folk of today with what’s going on globally or a lot closer to home?

Think about it?

Who are the genuine beauties? What are they doing?

Who are the beasties, the witches, and the ogres?

We all know or have known one or two.

As with the poem, poverty and royalty features here in the U.K

Both gain attention for different reasons. All living and visiting have views.

Forests feature too which is pleasant when the sun is shining. When it’s dark, with no light, it’s a different story. As the big forests throughout the world are reportedly ‘on the dwindle’

I do hope that the green spaces within my city of London will never be eclipsed by the monstrous stacked shoebox, branded as a ‘luxury lifestyle’, way of living’ Is it too late?

Is that the modern day ‘living in denial’ that the poet touches upon? As a result would folk be living happily ever after or dafter? It’s all down to perspectives and credit approvals I supppose. I’ll leave it there.

I think I’ll opt for a gingerbread house if one was to come up on the market and pay for it with some magic beans!

Call it far-fetched optimism but hopeful never the less! As I have learned and I’m still learning, anything is possible. Creativity is crucial. I bid the poet a good night. Thank you for the observation.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Truth be known

Poem: Truth be known

In all honesty,

I have to speak of potential possibilities.

The truth is nothing more than a retrospective interpretation.

Say it to yourself often enough… get others to believe in it too.

The news is the news right?

Facts are facts right?

Apply oxygen and cross your fingers

See what happens.

 

 

Review:Truth be known 

The poet is unpacking the state of the meaning of what is true, the integrity of truth.

That is a mighty task is it not? Especially now-a-days as it appears ‘everyone’ is an expert. What else would an ‘expert’ be speaking of if not ‘the truth?’  – it’s certainly their version of it but is it the right thing? The right thing for the situation that it has presented itself in? The stage/arena?

How it is being said, by whom and how often is of utmost importance for the message to penetrate and to become a ’truth’ right?

Trust is needed and not an ‘on the surface’ convincing veneer of a puppet show with a ‘loud mouth’ conducting a speech!

We need some wise words handed down from generation to generation without the interruption of a forceful contrived media culture that impolitely nudges the ‘sage’ in society out of the way with distractions (again, lots more stories for future times!)

The opening line of ‘I have to speak of potential possibilities.’ speaks loudly to me. That statement is the truth is it not? The poet isn’t taking everything that they come across or have been exposed to as ‘a given’ It’s not automatically factual. Are they willing to believe it? I don’t think so.  Like most artists, and the nature of art, the poet is an observer, interprets and reflects. They are not an instant doubter as that would be awful to not have any faith at all in humanity. One would be short-changing oneself and living in fear. The poet is willing to accept that there are a lot of ‘could be’s’ on the road to a truth.

The version of truths that the poet is aware of is one big ‘IF’

The poet appears to feel safer by looking back at what actually has occurred in the past as being the truth because it has happened and is there to be learnt from.

It seems that they have empowered themselves by staying in a safety zone of ‘the not holding of breath’ and the ‘not believing it until they see it’  The word ‘potential’ sounds like a safety shield of a word to not get hopes up. The word ‘possibilities’ offers options that could indeed occur. The poet is relying on what has been and gone to have proved itself and not to believe in a future that is not yet here!  In the meantime, is there a pattern emerging?  Strong clues to determine how things could end up? The same old, same old, same old? Repetition, repetition, repetition? – Bang! – there’s a truth right there, is it not? Think about it… Patterns are powerful.

To say something to yourself often enough is also powerful. What or who is it that determines that speech to self is also a powerful force. What are the messages that communicate loudly and penetrate deeply?

Facts are facts and if enough ‘oxygen’, as the poet observes, is given to it, then it is alive. That can be good or bad.

The ‘crossing of fingers’ at the end and ‘seeing what happens’ looks like an acute observation where a touch of ‘luck’ is needed?  Perhaps that of one or two politicians? As I write this today there has been a cabinet reshuffle in the country.(I’ll leave it to the reader to come to their own conclusions on that bit of news with the thought of ‘patterns’ in mind!)

A great little read where the poet’s observations can be applied to various scenarios in life. I’ll be keeping an eye on number 10 but as I have said, patterns are patterns – they reveal what is likely to happen next and that is the repetition of itself! Have a think! That is what is likely to take place – the truth!

Like the title of the poem, ‘truth be known’ and in this instance, it’s glaring, many see it, it cannot hide!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Living for the weekend

Poem: Living for the weekend

She’s a bit of a trail blazer!

She likes to start a new trend!

If she had it her way

the clocks would go back by an hour every weekend!

 

Review: Living for the weekend

Who is this mentally compromised or should I say ‘creative’ lady? She has clearly not thought this one through. Overdoing the lateral thinking here. Perhaps a bit of linear thinking is needed?

What has been asked for here?  To undertake this level of absurdity (let’s face it, that’s what it is, the turning of clocks back and forward each year, and we all follow and go along with it like the good little puppets that we are, aren’t we?) but to do this every weekend? Who in their right mind would want to do that?

 

Stop the clock! Stop it! Leave time alone!

Isn’t it bad enough that ‘time’ goes forwards and backwards during the year?

If it were to ever take place every weekend then the world be in even more of a ‘state’ than how it is already, no?

We’d end up having total darkness in what would originally have been the morning! and then that is repeated! It’s horrific!

Not only that but what a faff it would be with all the twiddling about with clocks on walls, shelves, and watches etc.

This would not be ‘living for the weekend’ experience but eventually the preceding day too and so on and so forth…or is that back?! Arrggh… Confusion and even more of a faff! This is no way to live! Again, I say stop this before it gets started as it would be ‘living like a zombie’ for a lifetime and not having that ‘imposed extra hour’ in bed once a year ( oh, how I laugh at this, “I’m doing you a favour rule!”)

This way of thinking is… a waste of ‘time’ is it not?

‘Oh the irony’

Time itself will continue to tick on by with or without a clock.

The birds will continue to give it the chirpy chirps!

This lady who has been observed by the poet, must have wonderful weekends that are in complete contrast to the Monday to Friday of her week? I’m intrigued to find out more!

Naively, a good idea.

But Here’s another idea;

Whoever this trailblazer is, have less on your plate during the day. You do not need to occupy every second of it with the unnecessaries. I’m guessing you don’t even know what those things are but the poet/observer has got you sussed! I’m sure there’ll be more poem’s to come. I’m watching this space!

Go to bed an hour earlier, oh ‘trailblazer’ that you are, and dream of a different kind of trend that won’t create such a mind bend!

Great little poem. That extra hour in my life this week has meant that I had the time to read and digest it!